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Chapter 69: The Beautiful Game

THE GALLERY DOORS opened, and the performance spilled back into the ballroom.

Not the music—that had ended moments ago, Denna’s final note hanging in the air like smoke before dissipating into nothing. But the audience poured through the doors, their faces still marked by what they’d witnessed. Wet cheeks. Bright eyes. The dazed expressions of people who had touched something beautiful and terrible and didn’t quite know how to return to the mundane world of wine and conversation.

I moved with them, keeping to the edges, watching.

Denna had disappeared through a servants’ door, escorted by two of Cinder’s people. The harp—that terrible instrument carved with Yllish bindings—had been removed by men who handled it like it might explode. Which, in a sense, it might.

And Cinder stood at the center of the ballroom, accepting congratulations from nobles who had no idea what they’d really heard.

“Extraordinary,” Baron Jakis was saying, his calculating eyes sharp despite the enchantment still clinging to him. “I’ve never heard anything quite like it. Where did you find such a talent?”

“Talent finds its own way,” Cinder replied smoothly, his grey-blue eyes back in place, the terrible black hidden beneath the mask of Lord Ferule. “One simply has to recognize it when it appears.”

I watched him work the crowd. A word here, a touch there, moving through the nobles like a card sharp through a deck. He was playing a game that had started long before tonight, and every move he made now was setting up the finale.


“Kvothe.”

Devi appeared at my elbow, a glass of wine in each hand. She offered me one.

“Drink it. You look like you need it.”

I took the glass but didn’t drink. “Did you see—”

“The knots on the harp? The way the floor responded to the harmonics? The crack in reality that opened for exactly three seconds during the fifth verse before sealing itself again?” Her voice was carefully neutral, the tone of someone discussing weather patterns instead of apocalypse. “Yes, Kvothe. I saw.”

“How long until—”

“I don’t know. Hours? Minutes?” She took a drink, her eyes never leaving Cinder. “He’s positioning something. Watch how he moves. Every conversation drives the nobles in a specific direction.”

I followed her gaze.

She was right. Cinder was herding them. Not obviously—nothing he did was obvious—but every word he spoke, every gesture, every carefully calculated moment of attention was guiding the flow of bodies through the ballroom. Away from the exits. Toward the center, where the mosaic pattern on the floor pulsed with a light so faint that no one seemed to notice it but me.

“He’s arranging them,” I said. “Like pieces on a tak board.”

“Or sacrifices on an altar.” Devi’s voice was grim. “We need to get people out. Now. Before whatever he’s planning—”

“We can’t. Not without revealing what we know. And the moment we do that—”

“He moves faster. I know.” She drained her glass. “So what do we do?”

I watched Cinder guide a duchess toward the eastern wall with nothing more than a smile and a gesture. Watched three lords follow, drawn by the promise of proximity to power. Watched the pattern form, the arrangement taking shape.

“We play the game,” I said. “Better than he does.”


The Beautiful Game.

That’s what the Modegans called it—the intricate dance of court politics where every word was a weapon and every alliance a potential betrayal. It was played at every ball, every dinner, every gathering where power congregated. The stakes were usually small. Marriages. Trade agreements. The right to wear certain colors at court.

Tonight, the stakes were the world.

I moved through the crowd with purpose now, no longer hiding. Let Cinder see me. Let him know I understood what he was doing. Two could play at arranging pieces.

“Lord Alveron.” I found the Maer near the western windows, watching the crowd with the careful attention of a man who had spent decades learning to read power’s currents. “A word?”

His eyes narrowed. We hadn’t spoken since my arrival in Renere. My presence at this ball was barely tolerated, facilitated only by Devi’s contacts and a forged invitation that wouldn’t survive close scrutiny.

“Kvothe.” My name in his mouth was neither warm nor cold. Simply acknowledgment. “You’re far from the University.”

“Recent events have made the University… inhospitable.”

“I heard about the fire. Tragic.” He didn’t sound particularly concerned. “I also heard rumors. About who might have started it.”

“Rumors are rarely true.”

“And yet they’re always interesting.” He studied me. “What do you want?”

“To save your life. And everyone else’s in this room.”

That got his attention. His hand—the one not holding his wine—moved subtly, signaling to the guards nearby to stay back. In a quieter voice: “Explain.”

I told him. Not everything—there wasn’t time—but enough. The seals. The doors. Cinder’s true nature. The ritual that had been building for months and was about to reach its conclusion tonight, in this ballroom, with all of Vintish nobility present to witness the transformation.

“That’s…” He paused. Collected himself. When he spoke again, his voice was utterly controlled. “An extraordinary claim.”

“It’s the truth.”

“Even if I believed you—which I’m not saying I do—what would you have me do? Announce to the King that his most trusted advisor is actually an ancient monster planning to destroy the world? Clear the ballroom based on the word of a disgraced University student?”

“Yes.”

He laughed. It was not a kind sound. “You’re either mad or desperate. Possibly both.”

“Probably both.” I met his eyes. “But I’m also right. And in approximately thirty minutes, Lord Ferule is going to reveal what he really is. When that happens, everyone in this room will die unless someone in power is prepared to act.”

“And you want that someone to be me.”

“You’re the only one with the authority and the intelligence to see this for what it is.”

He was quiet for a long moment, watching Cinder across the ballroom.

“He saved my life once,” Alveron said quietly. “Two years ago. Assassins in my bedroom. Ferule killed them before they reached my bed.” He looked at me. “Why would someone planning to destroy the world bother saving one aging nobleman?”

“Because he needed you alive. You’re the Maer. The King’s closest advisor after Ferule himself. When Roderic dies tonight—”

“That’s treason.”

“That’s prophecy.” I didn’t blink. “The King will die. The question is whether you survive to pick up the pieces or die beside him.”


I left Alveron with that thought burning behind his eyes and moved on.

Simmon was dancing with Fela. Not for pleasure—for position. They’d placed themselves near the northern doors, ready to move if the situation demanded it. Sim caught my eye as I passed, raised an eyebrow in question. I shook my head minutely. Not yet.

Wil stood by the buffet table, a plate untouched in his hands, watching everything with Cealdish practicality. He’d positioned himself with clear sight lines to three exits and the main floor. Good.

Devi had vanished into the crowd, but I knew where she’d gone. The servants’ passages. The hidden ways. Making sure we had escape routes when the time came.

Everyone was in position.

Now I just had to survive the next phase of Cinder’s game.


“You’re very bold, walking so openly.”

The voice came from behind me. I didn’t need to turn to know who it was.

“I could say the same to you, Lord Ferule.”

Cinder stepped beside me, two glasses of wine in his hands. He offered one. I didn’t take it.

“Wise,” he said, sipping from his own glass. “Though I promise it’s not poisoned. I have no need for such crude methods. Not tonight.”

“What do you want?”

“To thank you, actually.” He smiled—that perfect, practiced expression that belonged to a man who’d spent centuries learning to mimic human warmth. “You’ve made tonight so much more interesting than it might have been.”

“I’m not here to entertain you.”

“Aren’t you? Every move you’ve made since arriving in Renere has been exactly what I hoped you’d do. Speaking to Alveron just now—perfect. He’ll spend the crucial moments torn between action and doubt. Positioning your friends at the exits—delightful. It gives them hope. Hope makes the tragedy so much sharper.”

I forced myself to breathe evenly. “You’re very confident for someone whose plan I’ve been disrupting for months.”

“Disrupting?” He laughed. “My dear boy, you haven’t disrupted anything. You’ve facilitated it. Every clever move, every desperate gamble, every time you thought you were getting ahead of me, you were actually walking exactly the path I needed you to walk.”

“The Cthaeh—”

“Ah yes. The oracle. The malevolent tree.” His eyes sparkled with something that might have been genuine amusement. “It saw all futures and told you the words most likely to lead you to ruin. And you listened. Took every hint. Followed every thread. The Cthaeh set you on this path, Kvothe. I’m simply collecting the harvest.”

He gestured around the ballroom with his wine glass.

“Look at them. Four hundred of the most powerful people in the Four Corners. Nobles. Merchants. Military leaders. The King himself. All gathered in one place, standing on the largest intact seal in the world, about to witness a transformation three thousand years in the making.”

“You need Denna to complete the ritual.”

“I have Denna. She’s resting now, gathering strength for the final performance.” His smile widened. “Did you really think the gallery was the main event? That was merely the tuning. The real performance happens here, in front of everyone, with the full power of the seal at my disposal.”

My hands were fists at my sides. “I’ll stop you.”

“How? By attacking me in front of witnesses? You’d be cut down before you took three steps. By warning the King? He trusts me far more than he trusts you.” He leaned closer. “By using your naming? Please do. The magic you throw at me will only feed the seal. Make it weaker. Easier to break.”

“There has to be something—”

“There isn’t.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “The beautiful game is already won, Kvothe. All that remains is watching you realize it.”


He walked away, leaving me standing alone in the center of the ballroom.

The nobles swirled around me, laughing, drinking, dancing. Oblivious. The orchestra played a Vintish waltz. Candles burned in crystal chandeliers. The world continued, blissfully ignorant of the fact that in less than an hour, everything would change.

I felt it then—the terrible weight of knowing. Of seeing the future rushing toward you like a wave and understanding, with perfect clarity, that you cannot stop it. You can only choose how you meet it.

Devi emerged from a side door. Sim and Fela broke from the dance floor. Wil set down his untouched plate and moved toward me. My friends. My family. The people who had followed me into this disaster because they believed in me.

I had to tell them the truth.

I had failed.


“Kvothe?” Sim’s voice was gentle. “What did he say?”

“That we’ve already lost.”

Silence. Then Devi: “Do you believe him?”

I thought about that. About Cinder’s confidence. About the way he’d positioned every piece. About the three thousand years he’d spent planning this moment.

“Yes,” I said. “I think he’s right. I think we can’t stop the ritual from happening.”

Fela’s face went pale. Wil’s jaw tightened. Sim just looked at me with those trusting eyes and said, “So what do we do?”

And that was the question, wasn’t it?

We couldn’t stop the ritual. Couldn’t prevent the doors from opening. Couldn’t save everyone in this room from witnessing what was about to happen.

But maybe—maybe—we could limit the damage. Control how it happened. Choose who survived.

“We adapt,” I said. “Cinder’s playing a game where he’s already won. So we stop playing his game and start playing ours.”

“What’s our game?” Devi asked.

I looked at the mosaic floor, at the pattern pulsing beneath hundreds of noble feet. At the King in his finery, laughing with his daughter. At Cinder moving through the crowd like death wearing a smile.

“Survival,” I said. “We identify who we can save. We position them near exits that Cinder hasn’t blocked. And when the ritual begins, we get those people out.”

“What about the others?” Fela’s voice was small.

I didn’t answer that. Didn’t need to. We all knew.

You cannot save everyone.

You can only choose who you lose.


The next twenty minutes were the longest of my life.

We moved through the ballroom with purpose, identifying exits that were still functional. Finding allies—minor nobles who might listen, guards whose eyes hadn’t gone flat and dead like Cinder’s people. Building a network, quiet and quick, of people who might survive the next hour.

Alveron was our key. He didn’t fully believe me—I could see it in his eyes. But he believed enough to quietly position his own people near the exits. To have a word with certain guards. To ensure that when things went wrong, he would have options.

The King remained unreachable. Surrounded by Cinder’s people, protected by guards who wore human faces but moved with inhuman precision. We couldn’t get to him. Couldn’t warn him. Could only watch as Cinder guided him, step by casual step, toward the center of the floor.

Denna reappeared.

She entered from the eastern gallery, a different dress now. Still white, but simpler. Easier to move in. Her hair was different too—pulled back, revealing the slender column of her neck. And on that neck, visible for the first time, a line of Yllish knots in dark ink.

A collar. He’d written a collar into her skin.

Our eyes met across the ballroom.

And I saw it—the apology. The resignation. The terrible understanding that she knew what was coming and couldn’t stop it. That she’d fought with everything she had and it hadn’t been enough.

She was going to sing again.

One final performance.

And this time, there would be no encore.


The orchestra stopped playing.

Not on cue—mid-phrase, instruments falling silent one by one as the musicians felt it. The pressure change. The shift in the air. The sense of enormous wheels beginning to turn.

The nobles stopped talking. Stopped dancing. Stopped pretending everything was normal.

Because the floor was glowing.

Not subtly anymore. Not a hint of light that could be dismissed as candleflame reflection. The mosaic pattern blazed with its own illumination, blue and gold and deep crimson, pulsing with a rhythm that matched no human heartbeat.

“Ladies and gentlemen.” Cinder’s voice filled the ballroom without him raising it, amplified by forces that had nothing to do with acoustics. “If you would direct your attention to the center of the hall, I have one final gift for you this evening.”

Nobles moved toward the walls. Not running—not yet—but retreating with the instinctive fear of prey sensing a predator. The center of the ballroom emptied.

All except three figures.

Cinder. Denna. And King Roderic, who had stepped forward with the terrible courage of a man who ruled and would not retreat from challenges in his own hall.

“Ferule,” the King said, his hand on his sword hilt. “What is this?”

“This, Your Majesty, is the moment I’ve been working toward since the day we met.” Cinder smiled. “The moment when I stop pretending to be human and show you what I really am.”

His eyes changed. Grey-blue to absolute black.

His shadow deepened, spread, became something alive.

And the world began to break.


To be continued in Ch 70: The Doors Open

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